Showing posts with label commas. Show all posts
Showing posts with label commas. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 24, 2017

BEFORE THE WRECKERS COME



The unread poem deteriorates;
Children break in, stealing punctuation
To sell as scrap. A lone comma remains,
Frantically trying to make it appear
That the poem's still a going concern.
Vagrant words slip in; the metre,
Once stern and unforgiving, is humble,
Running errands in exchange for drinks.

Thursday, April 23, 2015

TEMPS



The woman I was used to seeing in the poem
Had left, taking only three commas and
A dented apostrophe. Another had moved in
But did not expect to be there long.
Her poem was being redone. The other inhabitants
Tried to pretend nothing had changed.
"It is just as I told you," God told me later
"People never like where you put them.
Keats  -- nice fellow, Keats -- originally hired
A tall, thin, nearsighted girl to appear in
La Belle Dame Sans Merci but Rossetti told her
She was born to be the Blessed Demoiselle
Since then, there have been at least twelve Belle Dames
Two of them, and by no means the worst, male."

Monday, August 4, 2014

FLAUBERT'S COMMA



In one of his letters Flaubert complains –
Or is he boasting? – that he spent the morning
Taking out a comma and the  afternoon
Putting it back in. The afternoon’s comma
Was, I have reason to believe, quite different
From the one removed in the morning.
Disgusted at Flaubert’s treatment,
It had crawled painfully across his desk
To hide in an ink-stain on the blotter.
Ever afterward, when he took inventory,
Flaubert was always one comma short;
It irritated him intensely. George Sand
Offered to give him one of hers;
He politely refused, not letting her see
That the thought of an alien comma
Had brought back his neurasthenia.